Short Story Progressing Well

[jacey]

1861 words altogether - at least 1,000 of them today.

Opening line:
          “Hello! Hello!” What a lousy connection. “Hello! Is any...”

Comments

[ferlonda.livejournal.com]

Oooh, excellent! What's it called? Or do you know yet?

[birdsedge.livejournal.com]

The woeking title is 'Pitch' - which has a nice doublew-meaning of pitch black and sales pitch.

[birdsedge.livejournal.com]

Sorry for typos. Sydlexic fnigers.

[ferlonda.livejournal.com]

Nice. I look forward to reading it!

[http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/]

Excellent progress.

[footlingagain.livejournal.com]

Great opening line - I'm already curious :)

Excellent progress, too.