WIP - Rewrite Finished

[jacey]

I've just finished a fairly major rewrite on 'Your Horse Sees Dead People.' Just going through it for obvious slips and changing where the chapters begin and end to even things up a bit, and then I'll be sending it off to the lovely Agent Beth.

brownnicky 's notes were invaluable. Thanks very much. charlieallery  are you still up for giving it a quick read? You kindly offered earlier, but by that time I was in the middle of alterations.

Comments

[charlieallery.livejournal.com]

Certainly am - send it along and tell me what (if any) aspects you're looking for comments on. :)

[klwilliams.livejournal.com]

Congrats on finishing, and good luck selling it.

[brownnicky.livejournal.com]

Well done on finishing and good luck! Happy to comment again if needed - just not in January!

[http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/]

Excellent. I hope it sells. I loved what I read.

[heleninwales.livejournal.com]

Congrats on finishing. I hope the agent likes it.

I was interested in reading that one, but I have too much critiquing to do for the job to be able to offer comments, at least not before March, though if you wanted general comments about the book as a whole, I could offer those. Now I have the iPod Touch, getting stories read is no longer the problem it used to be.