Head Meets Desk Moment

[jacey]

I was just tinkering with the synopsis for the Tam Lin book (still pondering a new title) when I had a Harry Potter epiphany. I've been ranting on about Rowling's endless camping trip in the Deathly Hallows book and I had a whole trip to a folk festival that I not only didn't need, but it actively formed a great big ugly speedbump in the plot. Book is now several thousand words lighter.

la_marquise_de_would you like the new handy bite-size version? You probably haven't got as far as the unnecessary folk festival yet and this will save you some time.

Comments

[http://users.livejournal.com/la_marquise_de_/]

As you prefer: I suspect I'll enjoy it in both forms!

[birdsedge.livejournal.com]

I'll send it anyway, then you have the choice.