WIP - Rewrite Finished

[jacey]

I've just finished a fairly major rewrite on 'Your Horse Sees Dead People.' Just going through it for obvious slips and changing where the chapters begin and end to even things up a bit, and then I'll be sending it off to the lovely Agent Beth.

brownnicky 's notes were invaluable. Thanks very much. charlieallery  are you still up for giving it a quick read? You kindly offered earlier, but by that time I was in the middle of alterations.