Written and narrated by Tom Baker, as you would expect this audio version brings the 4th Doctor to life beautifully. There's a framing story. The Doctor is being interrogated on Gallifrey and is being asked to account for his actions. The main story emerges in which the Doctor, Sarah Jane and Harry land on a remote island where people are turning into scarecrows. But this quickly turns into something more surreal as the Doctor, Sarah and Harry end up in a strange dimension where the enemy is the Scratchman, i.e. the Devil. I'm a little perturbed when the narrative focus slips. This is largely written in the Doctor's first person point of view, but sometimes shifts into what Harry and Sarah Jane (and secondary characters) are getting up to and thinking. Am I being too persnickity? Is it something only an author would notice? To be honest it doesn't really spoil the enjoyment, but it is noticeable.
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Date: Jan. 20th, 2025 03:47 pm (UTC)I've done a lot of editing over the years - I can never just ignore them.
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Date: Jan. 20th, 2025 06:20 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Jan. 20th, 2025 10:01 pm (UTC)It was terrible, with basic science errors that made me wince.
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Date: Jan. 20th, 2025 11:35 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: Jan. 23rd, 2025 07:33 am (UTC)And having lots of daylight from the light of the other moons...
And other horrors I can't now remember. Also, Avon was very badly out of character - no subtlety at all.
Paul clearly wanted him to be Clint Eastwood.
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Date: Jan. 23rd, 2025 05:32 pm (UTC)