Plotting

[jacey]

Plotting the rewrite of 'Your Horse Sees Dead People' as requested by my agent.

I need to stay very focused on the main plot points. I have a tendency to cram all sorts of other stuff in there, too.

Comments

[charlieallery.livejournal.com]

Hope it's not too major a re-write required, but also glad that she considers it worth working on. Shout if feedback from this direction of any sort would be useful.

[birdsedge.livejournal.com]

Thanks, Charlie. Yes please, especially since you read the first version. Ca I send you the plot outline?

[charlieallery.livejournal.com]

Course you can, Malcolm ... ;) I mean, please do. Please feel free to suggest what kind of feedback would be most useful at this stage and I'll do my best.

[birdsedge.livejournal.com]

Thanks. Sending via email.