Plotting

[jacey]

Plotting the rewrite of 'Your Horse Sees Dead People' as requested by my agent.

I need to stay very focused on the main plot points. I have a tendency to cram all sorts of other stuff in there, too.

Comments

[birdsedge.livejournal.com]

You're welcome to read the first version and then be a beta-reader for the second if you wish. You're pretty good at spotting the plot homes and another horsey brain on it would certainly not hurt. I'd be delighted if you want to have a go at it.

[ferlonda.livejournal.com]

If it's not 500,000 words, then do send it on. I'm not up to a huge novel right now (no time or energy for it) but anything shorter, especially with horses, is fine.